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Ideas & support; synthesis |
Text is clear and focused; thesis is clear and supported by visible examples in the essay.
Essay effectively synthesizes ideas
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Text's ideas are focused but general, obvious. No solid support.
Essay mostly synthesizes ideas.
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Text lacks clear idea, purpose, and details. No support.
Essay does not synthesize ideas.
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Organization
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Order compels, enhances, and moves ideas. Transitions used to connect ideas.
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Order moves reader through with confusion. Few if any transitions are used.
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Order is missing or random; no identifiable structure.
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Sentence Fluency & Word Choice
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Writing flows with rhythm and cadence. Elegant.
Words are precise, interesting, engaging, powerful. Verbs are vivid; few “be” verbs are used.
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Writing moves along with some awkward moments.
Words are common and obvious; they lack energy. Many “be” verbs are used.
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Writing lacks flow; it is difficult to read.
Words are simple or vague; limited in scope.
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Insight
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Writing is compelling and engaging; demonstrates insight into the novel.
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Writing shows little insight into the novel.
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Writing shows no insight into the novel.
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Quote usage and citations
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Appropriate quotes are properly introduced, integrated, and explained.
In text citations are included and correct.
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Quotes are included, but not properly introduced, integrated and/or explained.
In text citations are included and mostly correct.
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Support is mostly anecdotal (essay lacks adequate quotes) and not properly introduced, integrated, and/or explained.
No citations.
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Conventions
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Observes and uses standard conventions; few errors.
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Reasonable control of conventions; distracting errors
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Errors distract the reader and make reading difficult.
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