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Novice
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Apprentice
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Practitioner
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Expert
All of Practitioner column plus:
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Title
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Relates to the piece of writing
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Fits the whole piece of writing
Avoids being a label
Attracts a reader’s attention
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Fits the whole piece of writing
Avoids being a label
Attracts a reader’s attention
Is grounded in the piece; isn’t too obscure
Is memorable
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Is a strong or beautiful combination of words and sounds
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Essay Lead
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Lead is focused
Introduces the topic
Attempts one of the of 5 “Leads to Try” (Anecdote, Quotation, News, Background or Announcement)
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Lead is focused
Introduces the topic
Lead is crafted and developed
Successfully uses one of 5 “Leads to Try” (Anecdote, Quotation, News, Background or Announcement)
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Grabs the reader’s attention and introduces topic in informed and interesting way
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Thesis Statement
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Thesis is stated
Thesis presents one main topic
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Thesis is focused (not too broad or too vague)
Thesis presents one main topic
Thesis makes a claim or takes a stand
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Is a strong or beautiful combination of words and sounds
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Body Paragraph # 1
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First main point is introduced
Point is supported
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First main point is introduced via a clear main idea sentence
Paragraph is focused on one main point
Paragraph length is appropriate
Point is well-supported with sufficient evidence and includes quotes properly cited
Evidence clearly supports the thesis
First point is tied up via a conclusion sentence
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Details are purposefully arranged to build up a strong argument
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Body Paragraph # 2
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Second main point is introduced
Point is supported
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Second main point is introduced
Paragraph is focused on one main point
Paragraph length is appropriate
Point is well-supported
Evidence relates to the thesis
Conclusion sentence is attempted
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Second main point is introduced via a clear main idea sentence
Paragraph is focused on one main point
Paragraph length is appropriate
Point is well-supported with sufficient evidence and includes quotes properly cited
Evidence clearly supports the thesis
Second point is tied up via a conclusion sentence
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Details are purposefully arranged to build up a strong argument
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Body Paragraph # 3
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Third main point is introduced
Point is supported
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Third main point is introduced
Paragraph is focused on one main point
Paragraph length is appropriate
Point is well-supported
Evidence relates to the thesis
Conclusion sentence is attempted
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Third main point is introduced via a clear main idea sentence
Paragraph is focused on one main point
Paragraph length is appropriate
Point is well-supported with sufficient evidence and includes quotes properly cited
Evidence clearly supports the thesis
Third point is tied up via a conclusion sentence
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Details are purposefully arranged to build up a strong argument
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Essay Structure
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Essay attempts to follow one of the common non-fiction text structures (Cause & Effect, Compare & Contrast, or Chronological Order)
Paragraphs are logically arranged to “flow well”
Transitions are used between paragraphs
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Essay is organized according to one of the common non-fiction text structures
Paragraphs are purposefully arranged to build up a strong argument
Uses paragraph structure point by point or block by block
Transitions are used effectively between paragraphs and ideas
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Structure and transitions work well creating cohesive and sophisticated writing
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Essay Craft
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Demonstrates use of at least 1 writing craft and/or compositional risk
Example is highlighted
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Demonstrates use of at least 2 different writing crafts and/or compositional risks
Examples of crafts are highlighted
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Demonstrates use of at least 3 different writing crafts and/or compositional risks
In-text citation
Quote followed by a debriefing sentence
Examples of crafts are highlighted
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Attention to writer’s crafts and word choice is evident
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Essay Conclusion
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□ Makes an attempt to bring closure to the essay
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□ Summarizes (some of) the points made and returns to the thesis.
□ Attempts one of the 6 “Conclusions to Try” (Admonition or instruction, Prediction, Strong, punched statement, Anecdote, Pointed Questions, or Echo)
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□ Echoes the lead paragraph and revisits the thesis
□ Successfully uses one of of the 6 “Conclusions to Try” (Admonition or instruction, Prediction, Strong, punched statement, Anecdote, Pointed Questions, or Echo)
□ Leaves the reader thinking
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Word choice makes an impact on the reader
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Writing Mechanics
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□ Regular errors in grammar, punctuation, and spelling.
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□ Some errors in grammar, punctuation, and spelling.
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□ Few errors in grammar, punctuation, and spelling.
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No errors in grammar, punctuation, and spelling.
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