Consider the following when using supporting quotes and passages in your writing:
Anatomy of a Paragraph & Paragraph Checklist
Consider the following model of a typical literary analysis paragraph:
Topic Sentence *

Supporting
Detail*
Supporting
Detail*
Supporting
Detail*
Concluding Sentence
Each supporting detail is made up of:
1. Lead-in or set-up:
Speaker + Occasion
2. Direct quote or passage
3.
At least two sentences of following commentary/analysis
The Concluding Sentence:
Consider the following reminders when composing a literary analysis paragraph:
Use the strongest argument, or supporting detail, last
Be mindful of spelling, grammar, and punctuation
Use present tense verbs when writing literary analysis
Be mindful of proper MLA format when citing a source
Avoid poor diction and slang
Avoid clichés, first-person point of view, and addressing the reader
Thesis Statements: Strategies, Checklist, & Samples
The thesis statement in an essay of literary analysis functions as follows:
It narrows your topic to a central idea—all topic sentences and body paragraphs will develop and support this idea
It asserts something specific and significant about the topic, conveying your expert opinion
It may preview how your ideas will be arranged within your essay
It is logical, precise, and reasonable
Here are some strategies for formulating a thesis statement:
I.
Decode the writing prompt: Pay close attention to the language of the prompt.
Underline or highlight words that indicate specific areas of focus. Use the language of
the prompt while composing your thesis statement.
* Depending on the prompt or assignment you are given, you may be able to
simply restate the prompt while including your answer to how/why questions.
II. Take Inventory: Determine which supporting details or passages could be used to
prove your thesis.
* Be careful! Avoid arbitrarily selecting quotes. Be certain the supporting details
you choose do, in fact, support the central idea.
III.
Identify Relationships, Distinctions, & Categories: Once you have a variety of
supporting details, determine what various aspects of the thesis statement each
detail supports. These distinctions or categories will be used to determine what your
topic sentences and body paragraphs will be made up of.
IV.
Revise and Draft Again: Rewrite the thesis as many times as necessary to achieve
satisfaction. Continually refer to the prompt to be sure you are directly and
specifically responding to its requirements. You may find that after you have written
the body paragraphs, your paper has taken a different direction. In that case, you
must revise your thesis statement to suit the rest of the essay.
Consider the following checklist when composing a thesis statement:
Do not use first-person point of view in a thesis statement, unless you are writing a personal
autobiographical essay. Formal literary analysis requires the use of third person point of
view.
The thesis statement should be limited to one sentence. In rare cases, two sentences may
be necessary.
Refer to the writing prompt frequently while composing the thesis and be sure your
statement clearly responds to all aspects of the prompt
The thesis statement is located at the end of the introductory paragraph in a typical
literary analysis essay.
The thesis is a “roadmap” for the ideas presented in the essay; it informs the reader what
will be analyzed in the essay and in what order.
The thesis statement presents ideas in logical, clear, and specific language; it avoids vague or
abstract language, poor diction, and slang.
The thesis statement is analytical, not factual; it conveys the author’s expert opinion, or
assertion and avoids stating the obvious. It answers how and why questions.
The thesis statement is logical, precise, and reasonable.
The Introduction Paragraph: Strategies & Checklist:
The introduction paragraph in an essay of literary analysis functions as follows:
It focuses the reader’s attention on the topic and arouses curiosity about what you have to say
It specifies your subject and implies your attitude/tone
It provides background necessary to understand the thesis statement
It is concise and sincere
It comes to a point with the thesis statement
Anatomy of the Introduction:
1st Sentence: Hook or Opening Sentence
Engages the reader’s attention
2nd – 3rd Sentence
Should mention the author’s complete name
and the complete title of the work being
analyzed
3rd - 5th Sentences
Function to transition ideas from hook to thesis
Thesis Statement
Final sentence(s) of the introduction paragraph
Strategies for Composing Hooks or Opening Statements:
Use a vivid quotation
Create a visual image that represents your subject
Create an analogy for your subject
Offer a surprising/interesting statistic or other fact
State an opinion related to your thesis
Ask a question or define a word central to your subject (Note= Use these techniques very sparingly and cautiously, as they may be considered cliché)
Consider the following checklist when writing an introduction paragraph:
The opening sentence or hook engages the reader’s attention
The introduction avoids 1st person point of view, slang, and poor diction
Specific terms or language are clearly defined
Necessary background information is provided
The paragraph clearly and logically transitions from the hook to the thesis statement
The thesis statement appears at the end of the introduction
The paragraph is clear, logical, and reasonable
Avoid vague/abstract language
Avoid an attempt to be cute, funny, or terribly clever
The introduction is usually 4 – 6 sentences (longer introductions tend to ramble and detract from the topic)
Uses present tense verbs consistently
The Conclusion Paragraph: Strategies, Checklist, & Samples
The conclusion paragraph in a literary analysis essay functions as follows:
It finishes off the essay and tells readers where the writer has brought them
It restates the thesis and contains echoes of the introduction and body paragraphs without listing the points covered in the essay
It creates a broader implication of the ideas discussed and answers the question “So what?”
Anatomy of the conclusion:
The conclusion begins with a restatement of the thesis, not
a repetition, and gradually widens toward a final, broad
statement of implication
Borrows from the body paragraphs, without being flatly
repetitive or listing points already covered
Creates echoes of the introduction and body paragraphs
to reinforce analysis/ideas
thesis to a broader implication so the reader can see it
in a larger perspective
Strategies for Composing Conclusions:
Strike a note of hope or despair
Give a symbolic or powerful fact/detail
Create an analogy that relates your topic to a larger implication
Give an especially compelling example
Create a powerful visual image that represents your topic
Use a meaningful quotation
Recommend a course of action
Echo the approach/language of the introduction
Reference and make meaning of the title of the work you are analyzing
Consider the following checklist when writing a conclusion:
Avoid first person point of view, abstract/vague language, poor diction, and slang
Avoid simply repeating the thesis and/or listing the main points
Don’t conclude more than you reasonably can from the evidence you have presented
Echo the language/ideas from your introduction and body paragraphs
Expand on the implications of your ideas—So what?
Avoid any attempts to be funny, cute, or clever
The conclusion is usually 4 – 6 sentences
Margins:
In MLA format the margins are as follows:
Top: ½ inch
Left: 1 inch
Right: 1 inch
Bottom: 1 inch
Spacing:
All MLA style papers are double spaced throughout.
Heading and Title:
An MLA paper does not need a title page (but some teachers require them) .
½” down from the top of each page and in the right hand corner is located the page number followed by the author’s last name and a space
1” down from the top (and one double space down from the page number) in the left hand corner appears the authors name (first and last)
One double space below the author’s name is the name of the professor or instructor
One double space below the professor’s name is the class title and/or course number
One double space below the course information is the date the assignment is due, listed in the following order: date, then month, followed by year (no commas)
One double space below the date, centered in the page, is the title of the paper.
Titles:
A title tells the reader how extensive the topic is
A title should not restate the assignment or thesis statement
The revision stage is a good time to consider a title because attempting to sum up your essay in a phrase can focus your attention on the topic, purpose, and audience
A descriptive title is often expected for academic writing—it announces the topic clearly, accurately, and as briefly as possible
Avoid trying to be funny, cute, or terribly clever in your title