How does the poet use these elements to make his/her point?
For example:
“My love is like a bright sun, shining for you always” (l. 17).
A simile might be used to get the reader to understand the comparison of their love to a brightly burning sun.
“Come back to me / Come back to me” (ll. 14, 18)
Repetition might be used to make a point very clear; to show that they are desperate to get their love back.
Directions
You are to write an in-depth analysis of a poem/song. Focus specifically on the use of three literary devices: imagery (smell, taste, touch, sight, hear), tone/mood, figurative language (simile, metaphor, personification, onomatopoeia, alliteration), symbolism, allusion, repetition, or rhyme.
*Be sure to include a copy of the poem/lyrics + NUMBER THE LINES.
Introduction
Attention getter/ hook; introduce the title of the poem and poet’s name. Explain the overall theme/message. What is the author trying to tell readers about life? End with your thesis statement (mention topic and attitude).
Examples of Hooks
The standard hooks:
Everyone has experienced…
Imagine…
Anecdote (story): The man’s heart broke into a thousand pieces as she walked away.
Quote: It’s better to have loved and lost than never loved at all.
Thesis
The thesis is the __________ point of your essay!
SIMPLE THESIS: A number of literary devices can be found throughout ___’s poem, “____”.
But that’s too easy- you can do better!
A Better Thesis
In “A Dream Deferred”, Langston Hughes uses the literary devices of figurative language, tone, and diction to show that keeping people from achieving their dreams can have destructive consequences.
Introduce the poem/poet, tell what literary devices are being used, and explain what theme the literary devices are showing the reader.
Sample Introduction Paragraph
The man’s heart broke into a thousand pieces as he watched his former love walk away. Everyone has been through heartbreak and Pablo Neruda expresses his sadness in the poem, “Tonight I Write”. The poem speaks of heartbreak and sorrow, but ends with a promise to stop loving the woman once and for all. Neruda uses a variety of literary devices to show the pain and suffering he went through.
YOU MUST ANSWER THIS QUESTION: How is the poet using this literary device to make his point?
Elaboration
How is the poet using this literary device to make his point?
Neruda uses figurative language to make his pain understandable to his readers. Personification can be seen again and again, as he describes “his soul calling out to her” (l. 23) and “the starry night crying over the heartbreak” (l. 14). By using personification, Neruda makes the pain come alive, almost as though it is human. He also uses another type of figurative language: simile. In line 37, he states “My verses fall to the soul like dew to the pasture.” He is trying to show that his verses, the poem, is helping his soul just like dew helps a pasture grow it’s grass. The figurative language brings Neruda’s pain to the reader’s attention and lets us understand his pain.
Use Quotes As Evidence
Neruda expresses his pain by saying “my soul is not satisfied without her” (l.13). He uses this personification to show that even his soul is alive and wants to be with her.
Neruda uses end rhyme to emphasize [point out] how difficult it is to forget her, stating “although she may be far / she is always my shining star” (ll. 16-17).
Incorporating Quotes
For one line: “… wish that we were in his place” (l.12).
More than one line: “So on we worked…/ And went without the meat…” (ll. 13-14).
The family’s hunger can be seen when they recall “so on we worked…/And went without the meat…”(ll.13-14).
Sample Body Paragraph
Neruda uses figurative language to make his pain understandable to his readers. Personification can be seen again and again, as he describes “his soul calling out to her” (l. 23) and “the starry night crying over the heartbreak” (l. 14). By using personification, Neruda makes the pain come alive, almost as though it is human. He also uses another type of figurative language: simile. In line 37, he states “My verses fall to the soul like dew to the pasture.” He is trying to show that his verses, the poem, is helping his soul just like dew helps a pasture grow it’s grass. The figurative language brings Neruda’s pain to the reader’s attention and lets us understand what he is going through.
Conclusion
How can you relate to this poem? Possibly, give examples of how the poem relates to today. End with some strong, general advice about life that the poet teaches readers.
Example: Everyone has experienced the pain of heartbreak. Neruda expresses his pain in “Tonight I Write” because he not only wants his old love to know, but for readers to know they are not alone.
Sample Conclusion Paragraph
Everyone can relate to the idea of heartache. We know that Neruda’s pain was so hard that he decides that he can no longer love this woman, or write poems for her. People who experience heartbreak know that they must get closure, otherwise, the pain keeps going. Neruda writes this poem as a way to get rid of his feelings for this woman, but at the same time, gives us a beautiful poem that we can all relate to.
